Not bad, it's a good idea. But the style is too recent for me...
recent?
I try to make this makina 2000 style XD
what more could i add/change to this production to improve it?
and thanks for the comments!
Well, the melody synth sounds like recent makina, that's the only inconvenience I see... However, despite all, I like the way you produce, but as Kw3T says, I would like to listen your own ideas too, because I guess you can become a great producer

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